Metalized


He comes from the forbidden land,
With marks of jagged knife on his hand.

Lungs smoked up in ashes ,
Stone-cold attitude that clashes.

Rough long hair that can scrape your fingers,
The smell of which forever lingers.

Sparkling smile that can make you bleed.
Tabooed temptations that can make you plead.

Hoarse voice that slips like Velvet in your ears,
Foggy eyes coated with frozen tears.

Satan’s head rotates in all directions,
Heavenly angel bestows affection.

Beyond the fence, I stand and dread
He feeds me on brutality, blood (wine) and bread (flesh),
Leaving me…Metalized.

8 comments:

† Crudus † said...

Speechless babe! No one's written me a poem before. Owe u one! :)

Khyati said...

@ Crudus :)

SuperCraig said...

what?! he does the same to me!! \m/

djoiiii said...

ahhh.. a metal love poem, very interesting..whom is it dedicated to?

Rusty Razor said...

Nice Dedication indeed!!!

\m/

Ritesh Mayekar said...

"Tabooed temptations that can make you plead " kickass \m/

Raven said...

Love it .... Keep up the good work ... Keep Writing ...

Ayan
Strength and Honor

Spacegirl said...

awesome one!
all your poems have been kickass. keep goin
\m/